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Chapter 1 Page 16

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LibertyCabbage, April 17th, 2013, 3:07 pm ( Reply )

If this page looks familiar, it's 'cause it is. This is a modified version of Page 8, from when Freakboy's cell was first shown. What do you think about the change in Freakboy's mood since Page 8? Is it clear why he feels differently now than he did earlier in the chapter?

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mitchellbravo, April 18th, 2013, 5:23 pm

@LibertyCabbage: Looks like brotha's had it. I mean, he wasn't really having it so much before, either, but he's way more defeated now, as opposed to annoyed but kind of passively going along with it earlier.

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LibertyCabbage, April 19th, 2013, 12:35 pm

@mitchellbravo: Right. Okay. I've been trying to communicate some of the narrative via visual cues (facial expressions and body language), so it's good that I've been able to get that across alright.

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